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Find out why your sales page isn't converting
An honest review of your landing page with the top problems, a rewritten headline and clear fixes, ranked by how much difference they'll make.
When to use it
When visits are coming in but enquiries aren't
Step by step
Capture the page
Take full screenshots of your page on a computer and on your phone, or copy all of its text. Note who the page is for and what you want visitors to do.
Ask AI for a review
Attach the screenshots or paste the text into your AI assistant with this prompt.
Prompt to copyReview my sales page as if you were a busy [ideal customer]. The goal is for visitors to [book a call / buy / sign up]. Here it is: [attach screenshots or paste text]. Give me: 1) what you understand I offer after 5 seconds, 2) the 5 biggest problems stopping people taking action, ranked by impact, each with a specific fix, 3) 3 alternative headlines that say the benefit clearly, 4) any missing trust signals (reviews, guarantees, prices, photos), 5) one thing that already works well. Be direct and specific. British English.Make the top two changes
Fix the two highest-impact issues first, then wait a couple of weeks to see if enquiries change before doing more.
What you get
5-second read: 'Some kind of wellness service?' Top problem: headline 'Holistic solutions for you' doesn't say what you do. Fix: 'Sports massage in Cardiff for runners and cyclists'. Problem 2: booking button only at the bottom. Fix: add it under the headline. Works well: genuine client photos.
Tips
- Ask a real customer the same 5-second question; if their answer matches the AI's, you know it's right.
- Change one thing at a time so you can tell what made the difference.